
Today, a good friend of mine Anne Carrole joins us to talk about her writing life. Let’s see what she has to say. Thanks for joining us, Anne! Let’s get started…
What is your brainstorming process for a new book?
Okay, at the risk of sounding like I should be checking into a mental ward, I’ll tell you. It usually begins with two characters who pop into my head and keep nagging me to tell their story. Though the characters seem to come out of nowhere, I admit there are certain triggers. For instance, I love the rodeo. (And why an East Coast suburban woman is obsessed with this sport is a whole other blog). When I went to our small town’s annual rodeo, most of the cowboys there were picking up extra cash. During the week they were construction workers, accountants, etc. That got me thinking about the rodeo life-style and those that really dedicate themselves to making a living at it and what it does to having a “normal” family life. Then came my two characters—a rodeo cowboy and a woman who wants the nice suburban life she never had as a kid. At that point, my characters take me on their journey and I’m just along to write it down. That story became Re-ride at the Rodeo, available at The Wild Rose Press.
I have never had a problem thinking up story lines. I have the opposite problem of too many characters whirling around in my imagination with stories they want me to tell. When I begin the process of writing, I know the two main characters, the situation/conflict and how the book will end. The journey—how they get from point A to point B and end at point C—is what I don’t know yet. That’s the story that the characters will tell me as we go along—and that journey of discovery is what I love about writing.
Can you explain your typical work week day?
I am a consultant and a mom so I find my writing time between client appointments and school schedules. On days I don’t have clients, I write in the morning, before going on the internet. I have fallen in love with my AlphaSmart Neo. It’s light and compact, with a wonderful keyboard and battery power that lasts for over a year (I kid you not) and that also allows me to write on the road, while I’m in-between appointments or waiting to pick up my daughter. I do my first draft, regardless, on my AlphaSmart because it does NOT lend itself to editing, so I just get the story down on the page without revising—and then start the revisions after I’ve loaded it onto the computer. That has proven to be the most efficient way for me to write.
Tell us about when you made the decision to write.
Like many writers, I’ve been writing stories since elementary school and my college undergraduate major was English. But life and love got in the way of me pursuing writing professionally. Then my mother died. When you experience the loss of someone so close to you, it makes you reassess your priorities. I decided then and there I would pursue my dream. I’ve always tried to live my life with “no regrets” and knew that if I didn’t try, I would regret it.
What suggestions do you have for aspiring writers?
Keep writing and be persistent. It takes perseverance in this rapidly changing industry. You have to be able to withstand rejection, after rejection, and keep on writing and submitting. Being a good writer isn’t enough. You have to understand that this is a business, a tough business.
Also, there’s always something new to learn about how to tell a story, so work hard at learning the craft side. RWA (Romance Writers of America) and places like Writers U have a lot of excellent, inexpensive, workshops for pre-published and published writers taught by award winning authors and I’d encourage writers to take advantage of those offerings. I’m a big believer in life-long learning.
On the other hand, process, like whether you are a pantser or plotter, varies for each individual. I admire those who use charts and plotting wheels, who plot out the book in detailed outlines and know everything about their story before they put pen to paper. But that doesn’t work for me, or for a lot of writers. Don’t change your creative method—do what works for you.

Tell us about what you’re working on right now and what we can expect from you in the near future.
I’m actually putting the finishing touches on a story for an editor request. It involves another rodeo cowboy—hmmm, is there a pattern here. I’ll let you know if it’s accepted.
Great advice, Anne, and we look forward to hear about the news on the editor request! For those of you who want to know more about Anne, check out her website here. Thanks for joining us, everyone! Stay tuned for next week’s WonW!
Archive for November, 2009
Writers on Writing: Anne Carrole
Monday, November 23rd, 2009TV GuIdE: What are you watching this week?
Sunday, November 22nd, 2009
Yes, we all know about the splendid ‘New Moon’ movie that clobbered the ultimate first night opener, ‘Dark Knight’ with a whopping 72+ gazillion bucks profit, but we’re looking at things on a smaller screen today. Like my usual TV show loves that I am addicted to. Warning People!!! May CONTAIN SPOILERS!
Okay, let’s start with Glee. I don’t know why I continue to watch this show. Now Quinn’s parents have kicked her out of the house? She lives in a freakin’ mansion with perfect parents. Psychologically speaking, they would try to hide the mistake, not kick her out. I don’t believe it. Kudos to the music this week, though. The Glee cast rendition of ‘Stand By Me’ was moving. Seriously.

NCIS never disappoints. I hope I don’t jinx myself by saying this. I always wondered why they didn’t highlight the fact that Gibbs is more of an old-school detective. Well, they did in this show. And he was awesome. As usual. I can’t wait until next week, though. The holiday shows are the best because Tony is hysterical.
NCIS: Los Angeles has always been touch and go for me. No comment on the last episode with the ambush. I’m waaay too excited that Abby is joining the cast next week and she gets ambushed. Sigh. Sooooo exciting.
Bones. Oh, Bones. I heart Pops, Booth’s grandfather. He was soooo cute. I loved it. I even loved that Booth and Bones got a little closer. It makes me feel so much more entertained.
. I am just WAITING for Booth and Bones to lock lips for real this time: not for mistletoe, or a dream. Just because healthy lust, or alcohol, has taken over. Oh, and keep the mysteries comin’!
That’s it for this week’s TV guide review. Let’s see what happens next week!
Writers on Writing: Hywela Lynn
Thursday, November 19th, 2009
Today, we have author Hywela Lynn joining us. Let’s see what she has to say about her writing life.
Thanks so much for having me, Tess.
Pleasure to have you! Okay, let’s get started. What is your brainstorming process for a new book?
Firstly, I like to get to know my characters really well. I make notes on their background and anything I think is important, as they occur to me. Then I place them in a situation where something is about to rock their world, and hope they’ll tell me how they got out of it! I’m a bit of a ‘pantster’, so although I like to have ‘chapter headings’, just the first few lines to give me something to work on, and an end to work towards, I don’t go in for very detailed outlines. I usually find if I try to do this it changes a lot along the way. I often play a scene in my head like a film, especially when I’m in bed last thing at night!
Can you explain your typical work week day?
I’m not sure that there is such a thing! I no longer go out to work full time, so that should leave me more time for writing, but it’s surprising what crops up. Apart from a home and husband, I have two horses, Harry and T’Pau, which are unfortunately kept several miles from where I live. (My dream is to one day have enough money to buy a smallholding in my native Wales!) In the winter they have to be fed and checked every day, their water troughs refilled, hayracks stocked up and the shelters bedded down with straw. This can be a full time job in itself so I’m very grateful to my husband who helps out a lot. I also have a rescued Jack Russell terrier, named Bouncer,who is a real little character and demands a lot of my time taking him for ‘walkies’ and playing – but I don’t begrudge a moment looking after my furbabies. Animals are wonderful companions and add so much to one’s life. We also have a ‘hobby’ business selling Western saddlery. We only sell the ‘genuine article’ and import it from the States to the UK, and because of the freight charges and taxes, actually make very little money from it, but it’s something both my husband and I enjoy doing. So most mornings are spent checking emails, filling orders, and updating the website – or the dreaded stocktaking! I try to write a bit when I first get up in the morning, then when I come back from taking Bouncer for his afternoon walk, I manage to fit in a few more hours writing. I’m also a contributor to several blogs, including my own, and these eat up a lot of ‘writing’ time as well, although I love doing them.
Tell us about when you made the decision to write.
I don’t think there was ever a conscious decision to write. I can remember making up stories In my head when I was a small girl, and English was my favorite subject at school. I used to use essay writing as an excuse to write a story, disguised as ‘real life’. I began writing short stories seriously in my teens and had several published in magazines. Although I wrote on and off all the time, writing took a back seat to horses and endurance riding for many years, and a devastating personal tragedy overshadowed my urge to write . Then about three years ago, I brought out a manuscript I’d written before this happened, and which I’d put away in a drawer. I had a whole month in Wales, looking after my sister’s home and animals, and I started working on it again and revising it. This was ‘Starquest’. I joined an on-line writing group and found a crit partner who thought it was worth submitting. After trying to get an agent here in the UK, I found The Wild Rose Press and decided to submit it on the ‘off chance’. To my delight it was accepted, and I have since written a sequel, ‘Children Of The Mist’ and a novella ‘Dancing With Fate’ for TWRP’s ‘Song Of The Muses’ series, as well as a fantasy freeread ‘A Bargain With Death’.
What suggestions do you have for aspiring writers?
First of all, never give up. Try and write something every day. If you want to write a novel don’t wait ‘until you have time’, or it’ll never get written. Try and ‘make time’ to write a little every day, it’s surprising how the words mount up. Also try and get a good crit partner, who will tell it as it is, and provide constructive criticism without destroying your confidence. Family and close friends will probably read your manuscript but be too caring of your feelings to tell you what doesn’t work, or if there are glaring plot holes. You also need to be prepared to return the favour and crit your partner’s work as well – you can actually learn a lot by spotting the mistakes in someone else’s writing. Above all, write what you enjoy and have fun with it.
Tell us about what you’re working on right now and what we can expect from you in the near future.
I’ve recently started work on a third story in the series which started with ‘Starquest’, which will, I hope, round the series off by telling the story of another of the main characters, who played an important part in ‘Starquest’ but didn’t appear in ‘Children Of The Mist’ I’m also working on the draft of an Historical Western which I’m hoping to have polished and ready to submit in the New Year. It’s a departure from my usual futuristic or fantasy stories, but I started out writing westerns and actually feel there are a lot of similarities between the genres, foremost, the idea of brave men and women facing unknown territory and not knowing what dangers they may be about to face – and falling in love along the way!
That sounds so great, Hywela! We look forward to your new work. For those of you who want to read more about Hywela and check out her books, you can visit her website here. Thank you for joining us this week on Writers on Writing!

Hywela Lyn most of her life in Wales and the beautiful countryside and legends inspired her to write. Although she now lives in a small village in England, she is very proud of her Welsh heritage and background. She enjoys weaving romantic tales of the future, and distant, mysterious worlds. Her pen name is a combination of her first two names. ‘Hywela’ is Welsh and her first name but it was never used and she has always been called by her second Christian name, Lyn. One thing remains constant in her writing: The power of love. Love, not only between her hero and heroine, but between friends and siblings, and for their particular world and the creatures that share it.
She is crazy about all animals, especially horses. She lives with her long suffering husband, Dave, and has two horses, two ferrel cats and an adopted Jack Russell terrier .
Hywela Lyn’s first novel, ‘Starquest’, a futuristic romance was released by The Wild Rose Press on 29th August 2008 and in print on 5th December. The sequel to ‘Starquest’, ‘Children of the Mist’ released on 19th June 2009 and is also available in print or E-download from the publishers, and in print from Amazon, etc. ‘Dancing With Fate’ is available now as an individual E-book from the Publisher, or as one of three stories in Book II of the paperback anthology ‘Song Of The muses’, available on Amazon. She has also had several short stories published in magazines in the UK, She can be found at various places on the web, including My Space (where two of her heroines have a site as well) Facebook, Twitter, Blogger (including her own, and one she runs with two friends on a Friday, ‘The Author Roast & Toast’ . She also has a website www.hywelalyn.co.uk which has links to her other sites on her Contact Page.
TV GUIDE: What are you watching?
Saturday, November 14th, 2009
I know that I’ve been pretty bad about the TV guide updates lately but I promise I’m going to make that up to you right now. I have four different shows that I want to talk to you about. There might be spoilers so I want to let all of you guys know that up front in case you want to watch these shows for yourself and haven’t gotten a chance to yet. Okay, let’s get going.

Bones
I don’t think Bones can be any better than it is right now. First of all, I like that they keep mentioning things from past episodes in this subtle way that totally gets ya going. There is Booth’s surgery, the dream, Angela’s chastity thing, and even Hodgin’s new found fear of being buried alive. I like that Booth has officially admitted he’s in love with Brennan and I like that Brennan is slowly changing as well. I can’t wait to see how that unfolds. Oh, and the cases NEVER get boring. Bones gets an A+ on its progress report.
Glee

I’m sure there are going to be some people who disagree with me on this, but Glee has started a slow, downhill decent into boringsville. The music continues to be amazing despite the excess of show tunes, but other than that, the plot is slowly starting to suck. I really like the dimensions that the writers are trying to give Sue Sylvester, first by the date thing and then by showing her sister. The faking pregnancy thing Shu’s wife is trying to pull is just stupid. Hullo! Don’t they sleep in the same bed? There is no way a guy can be clueless enough to believe his wife is pregnant when she is so obviously not. That’s just my thing. I have to repeat myself on this point, though: the singing and music continues to rock.

NCIS
I think that NCIS is in it’s hey day right now. There is nothing that can go wrong. Tony is amazing. McGee is fab. Gibbs is a god. Abby is my best friend, and my heart goes out to Ziva. I love this show!!! No complaints, nothing. I can’t wait to watch this every week. ![]()
NCIS: Los Angeles

This show has been a hit or miss for me from the beginning. Some of the characters just pissed the hell out of me. For example: LL Cool J? Get some acting lessons please. Hot girl who is only there to look good? You need some acting lessons to. Cute young dude? You need to stop pouting like a fish. The person who has some of the most experience and talent on that show is Chris O’Donnell and he’s doing fabulous. I think that’s the one reason why I keep going back to see the show. I love the idea that he was an orphan with no family. I love the idea that he fell in love with a cop who broke his heart because something obviously went wrong. The cases in each episode a bit eh. I think they have gotten better as the weeks progressed though. Hopefully by the end of the first season the show will hit it’s stride and I’ll be able to enjoy every episode instead of fluctuating in feelings towards the show.
I will continue to watch all four shows as usual and update you all on my opinion. Vampire Diaries is completely off my scale because it’s too dramatic and too angsty for me. I think I got over that when I graduated from high school. I got my dose of Kevin Williamson when I watched Dawson’s Creek religiously for five years.
Let me know your thoughts, everyone! I’d love to hear what you have to say.
Until next week!
Tess
Writers on Writing: Tina Gallagher
Thursday, November 12th, 2009
Today we have a good friend of mine and a PLRW chapter-mate with us, Tina Gallagher. Thank you for joining me today, Tina! Let’s get started…
What is your brainstorming process for a new book?
I’m definitely what you’d call a pantser. Basically I get an idea and start writing. I do write down character names and descriptions, a little back story, maybe some goal, motivation, and conflict, but it’s not really an organized process.
Can you explain your typical work week day?
My typical work week day is crazy. I get to my day job at 7:00 am…not an easy task because I am NOT a morning person. I work until 4:00pm, then head home. I’m usually out the door again with the kids by 5:00pm, heading to a baseball/softball/basketball game or to some other lesson or activity. We all get home anywhere between 7:30 and 9:00pm. I try to hang out with the kids for a while and around 10:30-11:00pm, I sit down to write.
Tell us about when you made the decision to write.
I’ve always written. At first it was silly short stories, then when I was around twelve or so, my friend Lori and I would make up our own stories for our favorite soap opera couple. I’ve been writing romance ever since. About ten years ago I sat down and started writing a book, just to see if I could do it…turns out I could. Once I had it written, though, I had no idea what to do with it. Lori told me about RWA and I joined PLRW, and the rest is history. ;0)
What suggestions do you have for aspiring writers?
Sit down and write. I can’t tell you how many people tell me they’ve always wanted to write a book or they want to be a writer, but they just don’t have the time. It’s not the kind of thing you learn by thinking about it or wishing for it…you actually have to do it. Yes, you have a job and kids and other responsibilities but it’s not impossible. I started seriously writing with the hopes of getting published when my kids were only two and three years old. Even between work and everything else, I managed to carve out writing time. Since then I’ve had two books and numerous articles published. You can do it, you just have to put your mind to it and make the time.
Tell us about what you’re working on right now and what we can expect from you in the near future.
Right now I’m editing my completed manuscript entitled Misguided which is about a high school sex ed counselor and an over-protective single dad who have a vacation fling and are then forced to face each other in real life. It’s just about ready to submit, so hopefully you’ll see it on the shelves in the near future.

That sounds great! So excited for you!! For those of you who want to know more about Tina and her books, check out her website linked above. Thanks for joining us, everyone! Until next week!
Tina Gallagher writes Contemporary Romance novels that sizzle with passion and always have a happy ending, as well as informative, non-fiction.
Tina was raised in Northeast Pennsylvania and in-between softball, basketball, and music lessons, she and her best friend would create their own “happily ever afters” for their favorite soap opera couples. After a while, the soap operas lost their appeal, but the writing never did. She continues to use her imagination to weave stories about heroes and heroines who share deep, lasting relationships.
Tina is an active member of the Pocono/Lehigh Romance Writers, a chapter of the Romance Writers of America. She and her husband live in Northeast Pennsylvania with their two beautiful children.
Writers on Writing: Toni Sweeney
Thursday, November 5th, 2009
Today I have author Toni Sweeney joining us to tell us a little bit about her writing life. Let’s see what she has to say.
What is your brainstorming process for a new book?
First, get an idea. (That sounds sort of like Steve Martin’s instructions for making a million dollars—“First, get a million dollars.”) To those who are methodical and painstaking in their routine, I probably sound frighteningly haphazard but—there you are!—it takes all kinds, doesn’t it?. Ideas come to me from all sorts of places—something someone says, the last line in a movie, the last scene in a movie, a photograph…whatever, even a dream once. I’ve found if I think about it for three days and can’t make it go away, I may as well give up and write it. So, after I cave in and accept the fact that the next book has successfully lodged itself in my brain, I start filling in the storyline from whatever tiny germ of an idea I have. Since this story invariably involves people of some sort, I begin to fill in the characters and their abilities, physical descriptions, temperaments. If there’s some historical background or facts I plan to use, I start making notes…what to look up and where. In the midst of all this, I’m writing that first draft which may or may not change as I go, and it may take me a few days or it may take months—I finished one book in two weeks; the longest took six months—but suddenly, I’m off and running.
Can you explain your typical work week day?
That “typical” day/week is being a little neglected right now because I’ve been in somewhat of a slump for some time. A year ago, a good friend of mine committed suicide and that so shocked and horrified me (I’d had no idea it was going to happen) that I couldn’t write for nearly a year. Slowly, with fits and starts, I managed to turn out a few short stories (with a great struggle) and edit some novels already written but just when I thought I was bouncing back, another great emotional upheaval caught me unawares and I’m down again. This time, however, I’m forcing myself to get up and forge ahead. Anyway, back to the question…my work day starts with a cup of coffee and turning on the computer. (I need to add that I’m also looking for a “day job” so going through the newspaper classifieds, and checking all the local online employment places comes first before I do any writing. I apply online or make a quick run to the mail box with resumes and applications. After that, I turn to whatever I wrote the day before, read over and edit that, then write another chapter. I check my facts, look up items I made notes on, then check my calendar for any interviews/blogs I’ve scheduled and work on those. By that time, it’s late afternoon and time to stop and get dinner ready.
Tell us about when you made the decision to write.
You mean originally? Back in the dim, dark beginning of Time? I don’t think I ever consciously made the decision. As far back as the first grade, I was scribbling words under pictures I had drawn. Later, I drew comics—graphic novels—modeled after movies I’d seen. (My mother was a cinemaphile and there were five movie theaters in town so we went to the movies at least four times a week.) In high school, I wrote short stories in English class and was on the school newspaper, and also in college. After graduation, I was secretary to the chairman of the English Department of my university and saw his attempts at novel-writing and told myself I could do that good—if not better. I suppose that’s when I first thought of actually writing. Later, I worked at a clinic where everyone was a reader and I shared what I had written with the others. It was one of my co-workers who asked if I had enough nerve to ever submit anything. (I had five novels written by then.) I decided I did…and the rest is history. In the ‘70s and ‘80s, I wrote approximately fifteen novels, one right after the other. I read once that there is a high incidence of bursts of creativity in emotionally-disturbed people, so apparently, I was very emotionally-disturbed during that twenty-year period because the stories flowed like water from a broken faucet! Since I’ve hit a major writing slump now, it appears I’ve suddenly been stricken sane. The well isn’t dry but I’m writing with a struggle now.
What suggestions do you have for aspiring writers?
Be accurate: Unless something is part of your made-up universe, be as factual as possible. Sometimes I slip up, but I try to do as much research about a subject as I can before I commit it to print. If there’s one thing I hate (and other writers have heard me rant about this) it’s anachronisms or inaccuracies. I once read a mystery in which a character reminded everyone how Lee Harvey Oswald shot Jack Ruby! (And it wasn’t science fiction!)
Be determined: As the old Mary Tyler Moore theme song went, “You can make it if you try.” Just keep plugging away. Some day, somewhere, there’s someone waiting for your story. You may have to adjust your hopes a little, send it to a smaller publisher and such, but eventually, what you’ve been dreaming of will happen. Besides, there’s always a chance, a larger publisher will acquire your story from a smaller one, or it gets reprinted by a bigger press. Stranger things have happened.
Be thick-skinned: Most editors/publishers are fairly nice and civil but there are a few who have let their god-like power go to their heads and appear to relish insulting and tearing to shreds a writer’s work as well as his ego. Perhaps they’re taking out the past rejections of their own writings on poor unsuspecting would-be authors but they appear to enjoy being mean-spirited when a polite rejection will do. I’ve had a couple of editors who reduced me to tears with their verbal stabs. Then, I “picked myself up, dusted myself off, and started all over again” (sorry to keep quoting song lyrics, guess that’s a hold-over from my movie-viewing days) and sent the story somewhere else. When those same stories were eventually accepted by better-known publishers, I wanted to send those “rejectors” notes, saying “Look here! So-and-so apparently didn’t agree with your condemnations of my story!” But I was too magnanimous to do so. (I did get a warm glow from thinking it, however.)
Tell us about what you’re working on right now and what we can expect from you in the near future.
I’ve got so many irons in the fire right now, I don’t know where to start talking about them. Currently, I’m contracted to Class Act Books for a horror novel Serpent’s Tooth and I also have a story in the Chronicles of Riven the Heretic series and one in the Adventures of Sinbad series in the wings. One by one, all those novels I wrote in the ‘70s and ’80 are being printed so one day soon, I may have to force myself to buckle down and finish one of the six WIPs I’m working on. Right now, the one I’ve been concentrating on is The Seventh Mothman, a fantasy set in a medieval France-like kingdom concerning an elite group of soldiers who fight using vehicles similar to da Vinci’s flying machine. I have three chapters done so far.

That sounds great, Toni! I look forward to reading it when you’re finished. And thank you for all of your wonderful advice! For those of you who want to read more about Toni and to see her booklist, check out her website here.
Toni Sweeney was born in Georgia after the War between the States but before the Gulf War. Her actual writing career began during an extended convalescence following an automobile accident. Since her recovery, she has survived hurricanes in the South, tornados and snow-covered winters in the Midwestern United States, and earthquakes, and forest fires in California. She had been associated with the South Coast Writer’s Association, the Pink Fuzzy Slipper Writers website, myspace, Facebook, and YouTube. She presently has numerous novels in publication, as well as several short stories featured in magazines, online, and on amazon.com’s Amazon Shorts.



